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Hold On Little Sister

It hurts me to see you
Going through so much pain.
The anguish and humiliation;
I can feel it too.
I know it doesnít seem fair,
The sentence youíve been given,
And I know it hurts.
I can see it in your tears.
I can see it in the quivering lip
That used to form a dazzling smile.
It scares me; my knowledge
That you are ready to give up.
It disturbs me that you think
The whole world is against you.
Itís ridiculous, huh?
The prices we pay
For simple mistakes.
For saying too much
Or trying too little.
Hold on little sister.
Bite your lip.
Because it isnít over yet.
Until it is please remember:
That I love you
And Iím always on your side.
I wrote this on the way home from a trip to Georgia. My younger sister is in trouble and I feel really bad for her.
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themagickalshroom Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2006
i never read poem deviations, but i read this one (and will read the other four in my devwatch list) just for you. (:

your sister is lucky that you're there for her. i'm there for my sister too, but i threatenly-like show my love, lol.
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mystikwrytr Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2006
i used 2 be mean 2 her, but now she has it tough and i realize how fortunate i am 2 still b able to go 2 skool and talk to my friends. she is homeskooled now and she is grounded. thnx 4 reading my works.
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Shadowmanic Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2006  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Finally you submitt that!....Mwhahaha!
...*faves it and runs for the hills*
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mystikwrytr Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2006
yup... i have more. thanks 4 the fave!
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yamirenamon Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2006  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you do have more. good goly woman.
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mystikwrytr Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2006
i ave many.
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mystikwrytr Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2006
i ave many.
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Shadowmanic Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2006  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
finally you submitt it! Mwhahah!...
...*faves and runs for the hills*
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